Here are four earlier versions of the paper of mine you read for class today. The first linked file is the proposal for the wiki project from 2012, then three versions of the paper before I cut out all the things about wikis. Two versions have comments I received in them so you can see how feedback was given, first by a professor, then by a reviewer.
Proposal for the Wiki Project

Independent Study Paper with Comments from Professor

Version submitted to first journal with comments from “Reviewer B”

Version sent to second journal and rejected